I was shocked and my thoughts went haywire
Yes there was smoke, yes there was fire................
The bubble busted and out came my chewing gum,
I wanted to scream, but dunno why I kept mum,
I won’t lie, I was uncomfortably numb.................
The timing of news was inopportune,
My eyelids drenched in this premature monsoon,
To be candid, I didn’t expect these vagaries so soon.....
You think I don’t remember the month; it was June.
I plucked an old flower then; you have kissed a new one so soon.
Head got it but heart didn’t, this is the new phase of moon.....
As always, u gifted me a surprise,
As always, I couldn’t surmise,
But this time, you left no options for me to improvise..........
I always knew you were far better than me,
Mine was black, and you loved green tea,
I can't complain now, as it was my decree..............
There are times when you act stupid.
Realization only comes later for what u did.
I still feel dear, in those times I was a kid..........
Regards
T@run @ggarwal..
12 comments:
bhai.....the poem is good....but really difficult to understand contextually.....hope u got my point...i mean to say....the incidents which u have tried to capture in its various sections, are appearing difficult to understand....
sorry...above comment is mine only....but by mistake i was logged in into rounak's account....
i know that ...:)..thanks for your comments ..
i think u need to read it carefully to get what i wanna say ?
i will read it again now...in light of what u told me...while chatting....anyways...have uploaded photos of savan durga on my blog.....u may have a look....
amazing boss.......
you poem tells me two things one thing that the poet wanted to tell and the second you are a great poet.
I guess whoever will read this poem will feel something different, strange but very emotional..
thanks bagga for ur appreciation...
Hey Tarun,
Its a wonderful poem! aft checkin ur comment on 1 of my poems i went thru ur wrks, its wonderful!! Keep Writing :)
Dear,
Who is it addressed to?
Nice one though..
@ ekta ..thanks for ur appreciation ...
@ bluemoon ....thanks for ur praise ...and addressed to ..?...hmmm....a figment of my imagination ...:)
Though she loved green tea....but she could have easily shifted to black tea ...only for u ...
who is this ?
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