I remember, i topped the school,
Mom had a happiness attack....
She distributed sweets and snack,
You just gently patted my back ..
I remember, my leg was mildly bruised,
This time mom had a panic attack ..
She quickly rushed to get the dressing sack,
You smiled and pulled me back on track..
I remember, my first day in hostel,
Mom's eyes flooded while bidding me goodbye...
You didn't see me eye to eye ,
And tried acting like a tough guy ....
I remember,my home coming from hostel,
Mom hugged me and used to weep...
And served me paranthas in heap...
You only kissed me while i was asleep....
I remember, me crying due to occasional minor pains,
Mom groaning due to swelling in vertebre veins ...
Brother often exhausted with his sales campaigns ,
You consistently punched insulin without any complaints ..
I remember , countless such instances ,
When everybody exercised their freedom of thought ..
And your response was not more than a dot ,
But believe me dad , to me it meant a lot ..
I hope u remember, any of those nights ,
When u were dead tired that u slept with shoe..
Only then i hugged you like a kangaroo.......
Dad, after all i have inherited a lot from you.. :)
I Know , we both don’t need words ,
We can comfortably communicate like birds .....
Written by : Tarun Aggarwal
19 comments:
yaar....bahut aage pahunch gaya hai..
marvellous structure...
last line "communicate like birds" took the cake.....
bhai can't beat u in abstract writing ...i think u r master at it..
Bro this is the biggest thing u have given to papa he will never forget this in his life i m sure ...u have described him in the most exact way .....i think u can be chetan bhagat of india start writing some book.....waiting for more excellent work here....keep writing...
felt one thing on reading it, tht it came direct Dile Se!! gr8 writing from you T@run, keep posting
@ brother ..only u can understand in fullest sense what i wanted to convey ...this was just a small token to papa ...and ya will keep writing more as and when time permits ..
@ devesh ...u said it absolutly rite ....it came direct dil se...these feeings cannot be vicarious ..
good work done.. a tribute to parents.. keep up
cheers
Amazing boss ....it's nice to see u brought in father in the poem .. very few people touched this delicate,tacit relation ...
I'm impressed !!
I can wish and say only one thing KEEP WRITING ...
I'm sure many such insightful pieces are yet to come !!
Regards
Dvya Prakash Dubey
@ verma ..thanks ..will surely keep posting more ...and yeah a small gift to parents ..
@ dp ..it means great to be appreciated by you ...ya i know its a very tacit relation ...thats what i wanted to convey thru this ...
Tarun I loved this one, how beautifully the chemistry of father-son relationship, you have described in words. Ganju is right tu bahut aage chala gya hai.. m again saying start professional writing.
one more thing photos selection is excellent...
@ bansal....thanks a lot for ur words of appreciation ...its a grt motivation for me to write more and better ....
Impeccably brilliant bro.. Makes u think o all those moments and leap into your past and give it a fair thought.. A relation very few try to pen down...
Inexplicable....(the poem,the pic,and most importantly the content)..But very well executed.Keep up with the gr8 job...By far ur best in this lot...
@ zahed ...thanks bro..for ur kind words..
@ rinkey..thanks a lot for ur appreciation..keep reading...:)
Exellent...u hv actually defined a father here nd u r absolutely right dt a father is always like it he keeps on giving nd giving but never express anything....
Highly impressed by ur writing i cud never expect i m going to meet such a gr8 poet...
keep it up
thanks bhabhi ..for ur gr8 words of appreciation ...they keep me motivating ...ya its a very unique relation ...inexplicable.but still i tried to jot it down in words...
Amazzing!! and true...... just cant stop reading it again and again.....!!!
well. what shall i say?
u r just too good. keep it up......
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